Tuesday, October 1, 2013

A poem by Bart

Bart had to write a poem today for school. It was supposed to cover a strong emotion, use imagery and a simile. Here is his poem:

When They Moved Away
By: Bart Eldridge

When they moved away there were tears as big as clouds.
The sadness was exploding.
The tears were overflowing.
When they moved away.


tashapork said...

Wow, I wish he could have that published somewhere. It's a beautiful poem. Makes tears almost explode out of me.

Amanda said...

That is beyond heartbreaking. I'm glad he was able to express himself, though.

Our Journey said...

I'm glad he's processing the loss, but that is heartbreaking to read

Anonymous said...

Your son is very eloquent. And heartbroken.